Challenging topic. Beautiful visual execution, but lacks on the communication side of the equation. This might have benefited from a few more passes at simplifying the script. Though I question as to whether or not it would dilute the message and intent. Which leads me to wonder if this approach was the right one.
This reminds me of The Crisis of Credit Visualized, which I thought was much more successful. It was also twice the length.
“A” for effort here.
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